Hey Bloggers in Term 1 we have been writing some narrative's to improve our writing I chose this photo because it looks like it will be very fun to write about.
Here is the very exciting adventure about ...
The underwater scuba divers
Written by Grace Halaufia
KAPOW!! A long time ago there were these two energetic, brave scuba divers called Max and Robby. They fought for a hundred years to save people’s lives at the beach and now they wanted to go for a swim at the beach. They saw the old, big Titanic and broken parts of the roof. They heard big sparkly splashes on top of them. Max and Robby found a lot of treasure under the curly reefs. Then they started to go far away where it was very dark and they stopped at the point where they found a treasure box. Max found the key behind the treasure box and opened it with mighty. Robby tried to stop Max from stealing the money because Robby was so shocked that both of them were about to die.”Come on, Come on we got to go!” yelled Robby. Lucas was a big bad shark with very strong,rubbery gills and he wanted to eat Max and Robby...
After all Max and Robby stood still as a tree, then they swam as fast as they could to the Titanic and hid. They hid inside the Titanic and the did not see Lucas come by. All they saw was little pieces of rubbish all around them. They tried getting out but Max was stuck between the holes. So Robby tried to find a tool to get Max out.OMG! The shark is coming we need to get ready come on. Max tried pulling himself out and while Robby found a crowbar he got Max out. So Max grabbed the crowbar and threw to Luca’s face. Lucas the shark was so angry that he turned away and swam to his cave underwater. ...
Max and Robby shouted “AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH” as they cried. Lucas swam as fast as he could and tried to get them. Max and Robby were as fast as lightning but Max had a broken foot so all what he did was that Robby helped him swim on his way. Max and Robby was so fast that Lucas couldn’t keep up. Max and Robby stopped where it was a little bit to the shore. Max’s heavy air tank was so heavy that all his gear came out and his air tank was almost empty. Robby grabbed a rock and threw it to Lucas’s eye. Max and Robby swam to the shore and off they were free.
Then 2 weeks later...
Max was in the hospital and his foot was broken. Robby was so proud of himself that he was on the news saying that the First ever energetic scuba divers or should I say the tired scuba divers went down to the beach and stopped a shark from biting one of them. There names are Max and Robby. The big bad shark is called Lucas the bad one. Max and Robby are still living on their own said the reporter. Robby gave a smile and even Max gave a smile while watching it at the hospital on the TV. Everyone around them were so surprised and Max’s nurses were so surprised they even lifted Max up while he had a broken leg.
Edited by Grace
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